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	<title>Comments on: Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 2</title>
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		<title>By: Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 03:44:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stephanie - The character list is a great start, especially if your list includes a short snippet about where the story takes each character. 
If you haven&#039;t thought about your themes consciously yet, it might help to do that. Then again, it might not: everyone revises differently and what works for one author won&#039;t necessarily work for another. 
The other discovery activities (micro-summary and jacket blurb) are less helpful during revision than they are when you start querying agents and publishers. If, like me, you consider yourself more of a story teller than a salesman, promoting your own work will be a challenge. Formulating compelling sound-bytes as part of your revision process will pay big dividends when you&#039;re trying to snag a busy editor&#039;s attention.
Cheers</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stephanie &#8211; The character list is a great start, especially if your list includes a short snippet about where the story takes each character.<br />
If you haven&#8217;t thought about your themes consciously yet, it might help to do that. Then again, it might not: everyone revises differently and what works for one author won&#8217;t necessarily work for another.<br />
The other discovery activities (micro-summary and jacket blurb) are less helpful during revision than they are when you start querying agents and publishers. If, like me, you consider yourself more of a story teller than a salesman, promoting your own work will be a challenge. Formulating compelling sound-bytes as part of your revision process will pay big dividends when you&#8217;re trying to snag a busy editor&#8217;s attention.<br />
Cheers</p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 03:00:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I usually write up a character list as I get going and that&#039;s usually what my book is all about, characters.  I&#039;m not sure what this would do for me, but since I&#039;m between a major rewrite and good polishing, this might be worth thinking about.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I usually write up a character list as I get going and that&#8217;s usually what my book is all about, characters.  I&#8217;m not sure what this would do for me, but since I&#8217;m between a major rewrite and good polishing, this might be worth thinking about.</p>
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