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	<title>Comments on: Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 1</title>
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		<title>By: richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 3</title>
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		<dc:creator>richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 3</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 00:05:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] set your manuscript aside, let it collect some dust, forgotten most of the details, and read it with fresh and critical eyes. You&#8217;ve scratched down your themes, plot summaries, and character arcs in your little [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] set your manuscript aside, let it collect some dust, forgotten most of the details, and read it with fresh and critical eyes. You&#8217;ve scratched down your themes, plot summaries, and character arcs in your little [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Sep 2009 17:52:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Patricia - Yeah, revising is probably my least favorite part of the writing process. I&#039;ve just started working with &lt;a href=&quot;http://critters.org/index.ht&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Critters&lt;/a&gt;, but they come well recommended by the folks at &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Absolute Write Water Cooler&lt;/a&gt; forums. I&#039;ve actually just finished my Critical Reading step, so I&#039;ll write a post about step 2 soon!
Thanks for reading!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Patricia &#8211; Yeah, revising is probably my least favorite part of the writing process. I&#8217;ve just started working with <a href="http://critters.org/index.ht" rel="nofollow">Critters</a>, but they come well recommended by the folks at <a href="http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/" rel="nofollow">Absolute Write Water Cooler</a> forums. I&#8217;ve actually just finished my Critical Reading step, so I&#8217;ll write a post about step 2 soon!<br />
Thanks for reading!</p>
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		<title>By: Patricia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Patricia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Sep 2009 17:24:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great ideas for revising.  Revising is so hard.  Sometimes I like to work with a hard copy and sometimes electronic.  It is incredibly difficult to remember where you are from one page to the next--did you mention that in the last chapter now or not?  Critters!  Great!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great ideas for revising.  Revising is so hard.  Sometimes I like to work with a hard copy and sometimes electronic.  It is incredibly difficult to remember where you are from one page to the next&#8211;did you mention that in the last chapter now or not?  Critters!  Great!</p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Aug 2009 01:26:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s filling it in automatically and I&#039;m just not paying enough attention to catch it.  I&#039;m glad you are.

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s filling it in automatically and I&#8217;m just not paying enough attention to catch it.  I&#8217;m glad you are.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Aug 2009 01:44:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stephanie - If you can do major revisions in soft copy, more power to you! It&#039;s much more environmentally conscientious. Unfortunately, I can&#039;t do that. I need the hard copy on the desk and the pen in my hands. I can crit from soft copy, but scene chopping and shuffling are too difficult for me on the small screen. Maybe one day I&#039;ll make it all the way into the 21st century. I also like your method of reading the manuscript aloud for catching weak writing and awkward dialog. I just have trouble doing it if the house isn&#039;t empty! Cheers!
PS - your site link pointed to today.com again, but I fixed it for you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stephanie &#8211; If you can do major revisions in soft copy, more power to you! It&#8217;s much more environmentally conscientious. Unfortunately, I can&#8217;t do that. I need the hard copy on the desk and the pen in my hands. I can crit from soft copy, but scene chopping and shuffling are too difficult for me on the small screen. Maybe one day I&#8217;ll make it all the way into the 21st century. I also like your method of reading the manuscript aloud for catching weak writing and awkward dialog. I just have trouble doing it if the house isn&#8217;t empty! Cheers!<br />
PS &#8211; your site link pointed to today.com again, but I fixed it for you.</p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Aug 2009 00:36:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m entirely with you on the waiting period, but I don&#039;t like to work with a hard copy.  I like to fix it as I go on the electronic copy and sometimes keep a side file with notes to go back and fix.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m entirely with you on the waiting period, but I don&#8217;t like to work with a hard copy.  I like to fix it as I go on the electronic copy and sometimes keep a side file with notes to go back and fix.</p>
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