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		<title>Comment on Renewable Tech &#8211; ocean power part 2 by richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Friday Scorecard</title>
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		<dc:creator>richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Friday Scorecard</dc:creator>
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		<description>[...] that can be. For anyone interested in renewable energy topics, I&#8217;ve posted a new article on Tidal and Ocean Current Power in my Renewable Energy Tech series. You can also find it at Associated [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Friday Scorecard by Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 31 Dec 2009 23:22:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome to the site Aleda! I&#039;m familiar with &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.greenvolts.com/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;GreenVolts&lt;/a&gt;, though some of my readers might not be. I wrote a little about concentrator photovoltaics in my Renewable Technologies article on Solar PV. GV is one of the leaders in this emerging field, and right in my own back yard (especially since the move down to the East Bay). 
If you think you might have an opening, I&#039;m all ears. What did you have in mind?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to the site Aleda! I&#8217;m familiar with <a href="http://www.greenvolts.com/" rel="nofollow">GreenVolts</a>, though some of my readers might not be. I wrote a little about concentrator photovoltaics in my Renewable Technologies article on Solar PV. GV is one of the leaders in this emerging field, and right in my own back yard (especially since the move down to the East Bay).<br />
If you think you might have an opening, I&#8217;m all ears. What did you have in mind?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Friday Scorecard by Aleda Michels</title>
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		<dc:creator>Aleda Michels</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 31 Dec 2009 19:42:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi -

I ran across your resume and feel you might be a match for one of our current openings. Please check out the website and let me know what you think.</description>
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<p>I ran across your resume and feel you might be a match for one of our current openings. Please check out the website and let me know what you think.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Friday Scorecard by Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 02:22:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome Bill! Kris mentioned that you might drop me a line. Congratulations on the short story front. I understand that credits like that really help when you&#039;re trying to differentiate yourself from the mountains of submissions every agent and editor scale daily.

I&#039;m definitely a geek when it comes to metrics. If you read some of my earlier posts, you&#039;ll find charts for tracking draft word count, and revision page count as well as query status. It keeps me from going insane and puts the numbers in a context an engineer can appreciate. Publishing is a numbers game, and as scarce as useful feedback is, I try to divine trends from the raw numbers as much as anything else. Sometimes it feel like reading tea leaves or chicken entrails would be just as reliable though...

Genres are tricky right now. It seems like everyone is searching for the next huge breakout, but nobody can tell what that will be. (More tea leaves...) I&#039;m having a little difficulty understanding the military fantasy label though. I&#039;d never even heard of it until an agent suggested it as an alternative for me. What titles would you categorize as MilFan? 

Good on you for slogging through &lt;a href=&quot;http://williamgerke.com/2009/12/03/progress-report-nov-9-dec-3/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;NaNo&lt;/a&gt;! I wrote the first draft of Renegade in NaNo last year, but bowed out of this year. I&#039;m still deciding what to work on after I finish revisions on Guardian (if I finish revisions on Guardian...)

Cheers and good luck with your own search!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome Bill! Kris mentioned that you might drop me a line. Congratulations on the short story front. I understand that credits like that really help when you&#8217;re trying to differentiate yourself from the mountains of submissions every agent and editor scale daily.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m definitely a geek when it comes to metrics. If you read some of my earlier posts, you&#8217;ll find charts for tracking draft word count, and revision page count as well as query status. It keeps me from going insane and puts the numbers in a context an engineer can appreciate. Publishing is a numbers game, and as scarce as useful feedback is, I try to divine trends from the raw numbers as much as anything else. Sometimes it feel like reading tea leaves or chicken entrails would be just as reliable though&#8230;</p>
<p>Genres are tricky right now. It seems like everyone is searching for the next huge breakout, but nobody can tell what that will be. (More tea leaves&#8230;) I&#8217;m having a little difficulty understanding the military fantasy label though. I&#8217;d never even heard of it until an agent suggested it as an alternative for me. What titles would you categorize as MilFan? </p>
<p>Good on you for slogging through <a href="http://williamgerke.com/2009/12/03/progress-report-nov-9-dec-3/" rel="nofollow">NaNo</a>! I wrote the first draft of Renegade in NaNo last year, but bowed out of this year. I&#8217;m still deciding what to work on after I finish revisions on Guardian (if I finish revisions on Guardian&#8230;)</p>
<p>Cheers and good luck with your own search!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Friday Scorecard by William Gerke</title>
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		<dc:creator>William Gerke</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Dec 2009 23:08:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey!  A mutual friend in Boston turned me on to your site.  I&#039;ve sold two short stories (one published online and one pending) and hope to be ready to start shopping a novel manuscript in January.  

Your earlier post on finding an agent was very helpful.  Reading your posts, make it seem like a manageable project, as opposed to the big, scary mess other writing sites describe.  Plus, your approach and use of metrics (like the little chart above) is exactly the kind of thing I was thinking of doing, so now I have a model to work off of.

I think it&#039;s hugely encouraging that you&#039;re getting positive feedback with the rejections.  Most people don&#039;t get any feedback at all.  It says to me that you&#039;re on the right track in terms of the craft of writing, so now you just need to look at how you&#039;re using those skills, which is, what I think you&#039;re talking about when you talk about exploring other genres.

Urban fantasy is very hot now, although I wonder if the market&#039;s tapped out.  I think it&#039;d be tricky to find a unique angle.  Military fantasy has a smaller pool and might be a good place to break through.  I keep hearing noise around Steampunk and the &quot;New Weird&quot;, although I don&#039;t really know exactly how the latter is defined.

My approach (so far) has been to keep writing things in different styles/genres in the hopes that at some point I&#039;ll hit on that combination of something I do well and that will sell.  Fortunately, I read pretty broadly, so I can try lots of different things and still stay within genres I like and am familiar with.  Also, I&#039;m trying to avoid trilogy or series ideas, so I don&#039;t have to feel like I&#039;m abandoning something when the first book doesn&#039;t sell--I&#039;d hate to be in that position.

So that&#039;s my nickel&#039;s worth of free advice (as my Dad would say).  Keep smiling and keep the updates coming!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey!  A mutual friend in Boston turned me on to your site.  I&#8217;ve sold two short stories (one published online and one pending) and hope to be ready to start shopping a novel manuscript in January.  </p>
<p>Your earlier post on finding an agent was very helpful.  Reading your posts, make it seem like a manageable project, as opposed to the big, scary mess other writing sites describe.  Plus, your approach and use of metrics (like the little chart above) is exactly the kind of thing I was thinking of doing, so now I have a model to work off of.</p>
<p>I think it&#8217;s hugely encouraging that you&#8217;re getting positive feedback with the rejections.  Most people don&#8217;t get any feedback at all.  It says to me that you&#8217;re on the right track in terms of the craft of writing, so now you just need to look at how you&#8217;re using those skills, which is, what I think you&#8217;re talking about when you talk about exploring other genres.</p>
<p>Urban fantasy is very hot now, although I wonder if the market&#8217;s tapped out.  I think it&#8217;d be tricky to find a unique angle.  Military fantasy has a smaller pool and might be a good place to break through.  I keep hearing noise around Steampunk and the &#8220;New Weird&#8221;, although I don&#8217;t really know exactly how the latter is defined.</p>
<p>My approach (so far) has been to keep writing things in different styles/genres in the hopes that at some point I&#8217;ll hit on that combination of something I do well and that will sell.  Fortunately, I read pretty broadly, so I can try lots of different things and still stay within genres I like and am familiar with.  Also, I&#8217;m trying to avoid trilogy or series ideas, so I don&#8217;t have to feel like I&#8217;m abandoning something when the first book doesn&#8217;t sell&#8211;I&#8217;d hate to be in that position.</p>
<p>So that&#8217;s my nickel&#8217;s worth of free advice (as my Dad would say).  Keep smiling and keep the updates coming!</p>
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		<title>Comment on The epic agent quest continues by Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 22:11:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rita - that sounds like good news with the agent search. At least it&#039;s more than a form rejection letter! I&#039;ll keep my fingers crossed for you.

Heh. Some folks would say obstinate where you say dedicated, but hey... 

Good luck with NaNo! Doing NaNo and JulNo actually changed the way I wrote and gave me the confidence to keep writing, all at the same time. Now I know I can draft a novel in a month. The revision process is rough, but I suspect that&#039;s true no matter how you get through your first draft. 

I&#039;m a firm believer in outlines for novel length fiction now. I don&#039;t know how I wrote without them before! Keep plugging along and you&#039;ll make it. Every novel is written the same way... one word at a time.

Cheers!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rita &#8211; that sounds like good news with the agent search. At least it&#8217;s more than a form rejection letter! I&#8217;ll keep my fingers crossed for you.</p>
<p>Heh. Some folks would say obstinate where you say dedicated, but hey&#8230; </p>
<p>Good luck with NaNo! Doing NaNo and JulNo actually changed the way I wrote and gave me the confidence to keep writing, all at the same time. Now I know I can draft a novel in a month. The revision process is rough, but I suspect that&#8217;s true no matter how you get through your first draft. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m a firm believer in outlines for novel length fiction now. I don&#8217;t know how I wrote without them before! Keep plugging along and you&#8217;ll make it. Every novel is written the same way&#8230; one word at a time.</p>
<p>Cheers!</p>
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		<title>Comment on The epic agent quest continues by Rita</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rita</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 04:35:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Richard,
I have been looking for an agent to represent some of my children&#039;s stories. I had a positive response a couple of months ago when one asked me to revise a picture book story and send it back to her. It&#039;s been two months, which is pretty close to the cut-off time for a response. I&#039;m biting my nails with anticipation or dread - don&#039;t know which until I find out if the revisions cinched the deal.

You are so dedicated that I know it&#039;s only a matter of time before Renegade hits the bookshelves.

By the way, I&#039;ve given in and am participating in NaNoWriMo this year. So far I have 6395 words. I doubt I&#039;ll make it to the 50,000 before the 30th, but who knows. It&#039;s not over until it&#039;s over.

Good luck with the submissions!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Richard,<br />
I have been looking for an agent to represent some of my children&#8217;s stories. I had a positive response a couple of months ago when one asked me to revise a picture book story and send it back to her. It&#8217;s been two months, which is pretty close to the cut-off time for a response. I&#8217;m biting my nails with anticipation or dread &#8211; don&#8217;t know which until I find out if the revisions cinched the deal.</p>
<p>You are so dedicated that I know it&#8217;s only a matter of time before Renegade hits the bookshelves.</p>
<p>By the way, I&#8217;ve given in and am participating in NaNoWriMo this year. So far I have 6395 words. I doubt I&#8217;ll make it to the 50,000 before the 30th, but who knows. It&#8217;s not over until it&#8217;s over.</p>
<p>Good luck with the submissions!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 4 by Richard Perkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Oct 2009 19:01:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Z - I don&#039;t know about cool, but yes there are a lot of hoops to jump through before getting published. It&#039;s a long road, and given the changes the publishing industry is going through right now, it&#039;s one without a map! 
We all muddle through in our own way.
Cheers</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Z &#8211; I don&#8217;t know about cool, but yes there are a lot of hoops to jump through before getting published. It&#8217;s a long road, and given the changes the publishing industry is going through right now, it&#8217;s one without a map!<br />
We all muddle through in our own way.<br />
Cheers</p>
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		<title>Comment on Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 4 by Zorlone</title>
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		<dc:creator>Zorlone</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Oct 2009 11:05:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Richard, 

You make it sound so cool, yet there are so many things that are needed to do before you could actually produce your own book. 

Wow! Do let me know when you publish, okay?

Z</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Richard, </p>
<p>You make it sound so cool, yet there are so many things that are needed to do before you could actually produce your own book. </p>
<p>Wow! Do let me know when you publish, okay?</p>
<p>Z</p>
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		<title>Comment on Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 1 by richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 3</title>
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		<dc:creator>richard-rowland-perkins.com &#187; Manuscript Revision &#8211; Step 3</dc:creator>
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